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nokomis91
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Ive been wondering in the darkness for some time. Searching for something that I have yet to find...
Then among the mist of the night...you suddenly appear...
You would think this is what I feared...
To let you into my mind and take me away tonight...
I want to feel the blood bursting from my veins..
I want to feel you lift me to a special place..
Take my body in your hands...
Read my mind..then youll understand..
This blood----...
I can feel myself changing...
My body has taken on new form...
Your blood is so intoxicating...
Let our souls entertwine and become one..
Ive waited my whole life to feel the way I do now...
but somehow...I crave more..more...more
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I want to feel the blood bursting from my veins..
I want to feel you lift me to a special place.
Take my body in your hands...
Read my mind...then You will understand...
This blood----
Forsaken....mistaken....I cant help what Ive become. I am ..all yours now..your spirit lingers in my blood..
They say that Im crazy...your love is so amazing..getting me addicted to your touch...they just dont understand this blood----....
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nokomis91
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`This is a poem I wrote when I was talking to a guy......just curious to see what kind of replies I get..so..type away
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nightmare666247
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`nice verry creative
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`wow very erotic and dark...I like it alot
I love this phrase:
I want to feel the blood bursting from my veins..
there's something very seductive about your poem, a sort of macabre lullaby
hope you write some more
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nokomis91
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`This was a poem I wrote when a Dark Lord wanted to make me his Swan. (a donor basically) and it was for him. Of course I am no longer with him and have a mate but I kept it lol...I thought I did a good job so.
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nokomis91
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`Feed
I lurk in the darkness..
Awaiting my prey I must feed...
Glamour you into a trance I bring you to your knees..
I feel your heartbeat..
I can hear it beat like a battle drum in my ear..
I feed off of you, as well as your fear..
You are mine to take and I will drain you of all energy..
You pant, I drink you in..
You wimper in sweet pleasure..
I feel you buckle and your body gives..
You longed for dominat..., now you got your wish..
Quincing my blood thirst I am now full..
I return to the shadows as you are left on the dark cold concrete..
I am a creature of the night..
And to remain I must feed..
another one of my poems
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