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~------- and Long Haiku~

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Posted:     Post subject: ~------- and Long Haiku~

They look each other, are sensed, are desired,
caresses, kisses, they undress.
They are breathing, lie down, they scent,
penetrate, and they suck, they disfigure,
to sleep, to awake, to enlight,
is greedy, they felt, are fascinated,
They chew, they like each other, they drool,
They confused, they couple, they disintegrate,
are lethargic, they die, they return,
They distend, be raised, they wiggle,
They twist, and stretch, they are heated,
are throttled, fasten and shudder,
They try and meet, then faint,
They repel, is enervating, they desire;
are tackled, link, collide,
They crouch, they apprehend, are dislocated,
They drill, are embedd, and riddle,
are rivet, engraft, and screw,
They faint, revive, and shine,
They are cover, swell, and get crazy,
They melt, welded, are incinerated,
They tear, bite, they kill each other,
They raise, are sought, they rub,
They avoid each other, evade, and then they surrender.


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`Lots of emotions...I like it! It isn't completely clear either...which allows for personal interpretation...

I thought it was one thing at first..then something different in the next sentence...and then I'd think it was a third thing...but then I'd think it was the first again...and then something else...and so on...and yet there is a similarity of meaning too. Very interesting to read simply.../smiles.

Thanks for sharing...

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